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Witch Princess


Taken to the Vael by the Chae leader, Alice is plunged into a conflict between the Chae and the other fey of the Vael. She must make a stand to prevent war. What does she have to sacrifice to accomplish this? Is there is something more insidious behind it all?


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My friend made this gorgeous cover for me a couple of years ago. I finally found it buried on my flash drive.


  • 69940 words
  • About 280 pages
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