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When Tales Collide PhantomThief715

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Alessandra (Aless) and Ellis, best friends, who have come to an elite school of dance in Italy from the states. But, in the mix up of learning new routines and try out for the leading role in a ballet, the two find themselves in a convoluted fantasy land where the tales they danced to become a reality. The two are mistaken as the lead characters of the tragic tales and are forced to go along changing the story. When tales collide and their passion for dance arise, Ellis and Aless must dance to survive.

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  • 28612 words
  • About 114 pages
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2 comments on "When Tales Collide"

Sarah Scarlett on Sept. 13, 2017, 2:09 p.m. said:

Sarah Scarlett


This manuscript had many grammatical errors. Lack of correct capitalization being the most common.
The story itself is not clearly articulated and I could hardly discern what was happening.
As a result of the above facts, I did not finish reading this story.

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support number on July 5, 2017, 7:36 a.m. said:

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Stories of the book are very good and very interesting.

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