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When My Shift Ends Brittany Ingo

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When former beauty pageant queen, Ellie Wilde, hears of her grandmother's sickness, she's the first to offer to drive her to her chemotherapy. What she didn't know she was agreeing to was an obnoxiously cheerful blond boy somehow nudging his way into her life.

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  • 53675 words
  • About 215 pages
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  • Heat

    8

  • Tears

    10

  • Laughs

    9

  • Thrills

    8

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180 comments on "When My Shift Ends"

Sharla Matthews on Aug. 18, 2017, 8:54 p.m. said:

Sharla Matthews


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Gg908 on Aug. 18, 2017, 5:14 p.m. said:

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😀😀😀😅😅😅😅

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Kittykat on Aug. 18, 2017, 10:15 a.m. said:

Kittykat


The interaction between the 2 main characters is very interesting

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Meg. on Aug. 17, 2017, 3:24 p.m. said:

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LovingVivamus on Aug. 15, 2017, 11:56 p.m. said:

LovingVivamus


This book was beautiful and had truly amazing messages that lay underneath the plot. At first I was unsure about picking it up but now I wonder what I would have done had I not read it because it is miraculous and wonderful and one of the best books I have ever read.

Similar Stories : I would compare this to A Thousand Boy Kisses or The Fault In Our Stars, however the book is unique in its very own way and nohing is exactly like it.

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Chelsea @ Books for Thought on Aug. 15, 2017, 8:23 a.m. said:

Chelsea @ Books for Thought


The beginning was a little too rushed I think. Too much info all at once and it could have probably been drawn out a little more. I did really enjoy the last half though! And that ending was pretty cool!

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__allysongrace on Aug. 14, 2017, 4:01 p.m. said:

__allysongrace


The plot itself is amazing. The way she created the characters, the setting, and don't get me started on the emotions. I usually wouldn't read stories that are in third person, but I would definitely make an exception for this story. Amazing job!!

Similar Stories : I can't think of any books to compare it to; It also wouldn't feel right if I do compared it to another book. It is so unique! I haven't read anything like it!

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Chelsea @ Books for Thought on Aug. 14, 2017, 8:27 a.m. said:

Chelsea @ Books for Thought


Feels a little rushed so far but I'm interested.

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Brittany Ingo on Aug. 14, 2017, 1:34 p.m. said:

Brittany Ingo


I definitely agree! It's something I plan to fix with the rewrite. It doesn't feel long enough and the beginning is sort of a mess altogether.

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Smile_to_the_world on Aug. 13, 2017, 6:24 p.m. said:

Smile_to_the_world


I loved the reality in the book..my grandma had cancer and Cooper reminded me so much of her...the way that he didn't want to spend his last days whitering in a hospital. I was very happy with the twist ending.. I'm a sucker for happy endings but when you read a story about this kind of stuff you prepare yourself for a sad ending so i was happily suprised when it turned out otherwise. Conclusion: I love the story and I can't wait to have it as a book!

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