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When My Shift Ends Brittany

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When former beauty pageant queen, Ellie Wilde, hears of her grandmother's sickness, she's the first to offer to drive her to her chemotherapy. What she didn't know she was agreeing to was an obnoxiously cheerful blond boy somehow nudging his way into her life.

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  • 53675 words
  • About 215 pages
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  • Heat

    8

  • Tears

    9

  • Laughs

    9

  • Thrills

    8

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207 comments on "When My Shift Ends"

Katarzyna Wu on Oct. 16, 2017, 4:17 a.m. said:

Katarzyna Wu


I cried so much. Wow.

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Katarzyna Wu on Oct. 13, 2017, 10:40 a.m. said:

Katarzyna Wu


I love how the conflicts rise right off the bat, and there's really this spark between the characters. It's cute and bickering couples are my absolute weakness. Can't wait to read the rest!

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Xx_rose_xX451 on Oct. 9, 2017, 12:09 a.m. said:

Xx_rose_xX451


I really loved this book. It was,ver well written and such a good idea!

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MochiJimin on Oct. 8, 2017, 11:58 p.m. said:

MochiJimin


I liked how inspiring it was

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thinkiloveyoubetter on Oct. 6, 2017, 3:32 p.m. said:

thinkiloveyoubetter


This was a lovely book. It was awfully realistic and heart wrenching at times, but it never ceased to make me smile. The characters were greatly developed, especially Cooper. He was so beautifully written that I had already fallen in love with his character in the first chapter. I guess it can be improved by focusing a bit more on Ellie's pageantry past. Other than that, the author did a wonderful job. She is truly talented and deserves to be published.

Similar Stories : I would compare it to 'The Fault in Our Stars' and 'A Walk to Remember'. Mostly because they all involve falling in love tragically. Despite Cooper being the sick one, Ellie also struggles with cancer indirectly. They're all wonderfully heartbreaking books.

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Iluvbooks on Oct. 4, 2017, 6:52 p.m. said:

Iluvbooks


I absolutely loved reading this book. The author did a amazing job in getting us readers to know the characters. How can they improve it? GET IT PUBLISHED SO I CAN HOLD IT.

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Aria on Oct. 4, 2017, 10:09 a.m. said:

Aria


I really need this book to be published 😢😢

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Aria on Oct. 4, 2017, 10:08 a.m. said:

Aria


I liked the plot of the book alot. I think that this book doesn't really need improvement.

Similar Stories : I wouldn't compare this to anything because i haven't read anything like this at all. That's not a bad at all. That's a great thing.

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Jessicaaaaa on Oct. 2, 2017, 2:20 p.m. said:

Jessicaaaaa


This is amazing! One of the best books I’ve ever read.

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Obsessed on Oct. 1, 2017, 8:14 p.m. said:

Obsessed


I loved how bittersweet it was and how honest the characters were, I cried a lot and also laughed a lot so it was a very good balance. In all honesty it was one of the most refreshing books I've ever read and I hope that it gets all the recognition it deserves.

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