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When My Shift Ends Brittany Ingo

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When former beauty pageant queen, Ellie Wilde, hears of her grandmother's sickness, she's the first to offer to drive her to her chemotherapy. What she didn't know she was agreeing to was an obnoxiously cheerful blond boy somehow nudging his way into her life.

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  • 53675 words
  • About 215 pages
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  • Heat

    8

  • Tears

    9

  • Laughs

    9

  • Thrills

    8

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141 comments on "When My Shift Ends"

maysadevara on June 24, 2017, 10:08 a.m. said:

maysadevara


i loved this book because it was so heart wrenching. it made me want to laugh and cry at the same time. when ellie's grandma died, i was on the verge of tears because i recently lost my grandpa to cancer and i could truly relate. cooper and ellie's story was beautiful and i would read this book over a million times if i had that much time.

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PoppinCornDogs on June 20, 2017, 7:02 a.m. said:

PoppinCornDogs


It made me laugh, it made me cry, this book gave me all the feels and its been so long since I have found such an amazing book like this.

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Erin on June 18, 2017, 4:21 a.m. said:

Erin


It was amazing and heartfelt, although there wasn't much description to tell the reader about the setting and characters

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Alison Wonderland on June 15, 2017, 2:46 p.m. said:

Alison Wonderland


It was perfect!

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Reina Galí on June 14, 2017, 9:04 p.m. said:

Reina Galí


I enjoy the concept of the book, but I didn't find Cooper likable. His beginning is too obnoxious to be charming, and I don't find he changes as a character. The third person view doesn't work since it was mainly about Ellie--it makes the ending odd and forced. I really think working on the chemistry of the character and the narration would help.

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Susie on June 14, 2017, 4:36 a.m. said:

Susie


How realistic it was and the ending.

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Susie on June 14, 2017, 4:35 a.m. said:

Susie


I like the plot twist and how realistic it was.

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astrologicalys on June 7, 2017, 8:38 p.m. said:

astrologicalys


I have no suggestions, it was perfect!

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mbrownaya on June 4, 2017, 6:43 a.m. said:

mbrownaya


the ending was so clever and the characters were so lovable

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Jaimee.Ratkoski on June 2, 2017, 10:57 p.m. said:

Jaimee.Ratkoski


i liked how the writer had cooper dying in the dream but really just waking up.

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