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UNVISIBLE

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Five years ago a scientist injected Owen with an invisibility serum. Four years ago he ran away. The invisibility was permanent, and returning to his old life too dangerous, so he went into hiding.

Now 17, he lives in a school—he has food and shelter, plus it's the closest to a normal life he can get. He's lonely, but at least he's safe. Until a stupid decision to "borrow" a book from a girl steamrolls into a series of mistakes, and he gets on the radar of some unvisibles. The group who injected him doesn't like loose ends. The smart thing is to get out of town, fast—except for the girl.

Thanks to his screw-up, she's on their radar now, too. He has to decide: save himself or protect her. But not hiding anymore could mean risking more than he realizes—like his chance to ever be cured.

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  • 56574 words
  • About 226 pages
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  • Heat

    5

  • Tears

    1

  • Laughs

    4

  • Thrills

    7