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The Realistic Line of Time Anna K & Catherine M

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Rachel White lives... well, way back when, with her friends, and major crush - Jeremy. They find a strange village, and a building in the center that takes them to the future, where Rachel lives another life. She is then taken to the future, and that's where things get complicated.

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  • About 205 pages
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2 comments on "The Realistic Line of Time"

Lucero Pena on Feb. 23, 2017, 7:12 a.m. said:

Lucero Pena


Just started reading. So far I love the descriptions of the people and the town; it has an old-timey feel which I'm intrigued by, and speaking of - what year is 'the past' supposed to be taking place in? I tried to figure it out, but couldn't. In a different note, the part where Rachel and Jeremy had to confess to liking each other in front of his ex\ their mutual friend was so awkward, and amusing. Somehow I feel like this might create problems for the group later though. 🙊

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Anna K & Catherine M on Feb. 23, 2017, 1:57 p.m. said:

Anna K & Catherine M


Hi! I'm not really sure what year it's in, I suppose just a REALLY long time ago, but I should probably put something about that - thanks!

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