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The Breaking Point


Summers at Panamore beach have become legendary to all, even the 17 year old lifeguards, Chloe Finch and Logan Grantmore. Caught in a world caused by Logan's return, Chloe's scared personality affects damage to not only other, but her inner self as well. Many things keep the two part, it's full of job loss and family heartache, but none seem equivalent to the fear in Chloe's blue twinkling eyes. And though it seems like this will be a long two months, the summer has only just begun, and neither of them can't stand the might just become the breaking point.


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