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Scratch That Tiana Smith

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Mia’s best friend is Cupid. No really. A teenage Cupid who went out of town and foolishly left behind her charmed journal and pen—the two items Mia needs in order to make the football hottie, Vince Demetrius, notice her.

Vince falls for her all right, but Mia doesn't count on Logan, the photographer for the school newspaper who's surprisingly suave and persistent. With two guys now after her, Mia tries to dial down the crazy by directing Logan's feelings elsewhere, namely toward her neighbor, Elena.

Yeah, too bad for Mia, her neighbor likes Vince. As if that wasn't enough, Mia has two weeks until her bestie returns. Fourteen short days to put all the right couples back together or she can kiss her perfect match goodbye forever.

But in this retelling of A Midsummer Night's Dream, the course of true love never does run smooth.

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  • 66854 words
  • About 267 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    6

  • Tears

    3

  • Laughs

    8

  • Thrills

    3

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29 comments on "Scratch That"

caralin on March 14, 2017, 4:11 p.m. said:

caralin


This was so cute and entertaining. Honestly, I think it's great the way it is. This would make a really fun February release when it gets published.

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Tiana Smith on March 20, 2017, 5:52 p.m. said:

Tiana Smith


I love how you say "when" and not "if" 😂 So glad you enjoyed it!

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Skye Eastridge on Feb. 21, 2017, 8:49 p.m. said:

Skye Eastridge


Well written and simple in the best possible way. You didn't over complicate what could have easily been over complicated.

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Skye Eastridge on Feb. 21, 2017, 12:55 a.m. said:

Skye Eastridge


Cute so far

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T. K. Yeager on Feb. 18, 2017, 3:50 p.m. said:

T. K. Yeager


Hey Tiana! Excellent writing and great book! I loved Mia's character and I super fell in love with Logan. He is SO dreamy! I was so happy that they made it together in the end since it wasn't super immediately obvious that everything was going to work out, even if I suspected it would.

My only suggestion is that the pacing did drag a little from time to time. There were scenes like the one in her dad's office where she was contemplating life and there wasn't much action or much moving the plot forward. At times like those, I prefer stories to be moving just a little more quickly, even though it provides some good character insights. Beside those slow points, I loved all of the scenes between the main characters and all of their drama. It was the perfect love triangle/square/whatever haha.
Thanks so much for sharing your story and best of luck in season 10!

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Anna K & Catherine M on Feb. 17, 2017, 5:18 p.m. said:

Anna K & Catherine M


This doesn't need any improvements, just to be published. Seriously spectacular.

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Tiana Smith on March 20, 2017, 5:49 p.m. said:

Tiana Smith


*hugs forever*

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T. K. Yeager on Feb. 16, 2017, 1:40 a.m. said:

T. K. Yeager


Hey Tiana! This is a fun story so far and I like the messy love triangle your main character is getting herself into so far. It will be fun to keep reading :)

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Anna K & Catherine M on Feb. 15, 2017, 9:21 p.m. said:

Anna K & Catherine M


Let me just say... wow. I usually see grammar mistakes and stuff like that in manuscripts, but this is just kinda plain perfect. I've read the play that this is based off of, and it syncs with that really well. Really, just WOW.

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Tiana Smith on March 20, 2017, 5:49 p.m. said:

Tiana Smith


Aww, thank you!

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