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SAVING ARDEN Grace Elizabeth

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Arden Erdos’ priorities are challenged minutes after encountering Emery Thomas, a fearless outcast with a gorgeous face who left something behind. Bittersweetly, it’s not just his good looks that distract her but the fact that he predicts her impending death the first chance they meet. With this threat looming Arden attempts to find solace in her studies, but unbearable brushes with death -and Emery- continue as he tries to save her and she tries to stay away.

The twisted threads of Arden’s life begin to unravel more as she discovers that her dad has secrets of his own tied to confiscated research and an undisclosed job. In the midst of these revelations, and true to Emery’s prediction, Arden finds herself in the hospital, and this time quite possibly for good.

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  • 60047 words
  • About 240 pages
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  • Tears

    9

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

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24 comments on "SAVING ARDEN"

Peri June on Aug. 29, 2017, 8:45 p.m. said:

Peri June


Really engaging story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop until I'd finished the whole thing. Really curious to find out what happens next.

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Grace Elizabeth on Aug. 31, 2017, 2:46 p.m. said:

Grace Elizabeth


Thanks so much, Peri June! Thrilled to know it was hard to put down! :)

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Pamela Delupio on July 9, 2017, 2:34 a.m. said:

Pamela Delupio


This story turned out to be different than I thought it would. I expected it to be more paranormal. But I absolutely enjoyed it. I feel for Arden. It must have been scary thinking she was going to follow in her mother's footsteps. And I felt for Emery because though he has a bad boy side, he seems to be really misunderstood. I did however, wish there was more on his "knowing," more details. And why he thought he could save Arden. I also wanted to know more about her dad and what he was hiding. Seems like the story left off with just some conjectures but no real answers. I assume there's a sequel because the ending was quite abrupt. Would love to read it to get a few questions answered. But all in all, the story flowed well and was well thought out.

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Grace Elizabeth on July 9, 2017, 11:54 a.m. said:

Grace Elizabeth


Hi, Pamela. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Alethea on July 7, 2017, 10:14 a.m. said:

Alethea


Appropriately angsty YA novel meets supernatural romance. Reading cover-to-cover was smooth sailing and a nice way to spend a couple of hours this afternoon. Would read more from this author. Spotted a couple of spelling/grammatical errors; nothing major and I expect they'll be picked up in the final editing process (if they haven't already been).

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Grace Elizabeth on July 7, 2017, 4:50 p.m. said:

Grace Elizabeth


"Approriately angsty YA novel meets supernatural romance" = LOVE IT!!! :) I am beyond thrilled that you loved it so much, Alethea, and to know that you read it cover-to-cover like that will have me smiling the rest of the day :)

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Alethea on July 7, 2017, 1:23 a.m. said:

Alethea


Page turner. Just discovered this website and had some time on my hands. Am now mentally adjusting my plans for the next few hours in order to make time thanks to just one chapter of Saving Arden.

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Grace Elizabeth on July 7, 2017, 4:47 p.m. said:

Grace Elizabeth


Hello, Alethea! You have made my writer heart so happy with this comment <3 Thank you!

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Pamela Delupio on July 7, 2017, 12:17 a.m. said:

Pamela Delupio


End of Ch. 3, and it's intriguing so far. Emery is kind of scary, but I admit I'm dying to know who or what he is. Will read on to find out.

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Grace Elizabeth on July 7, 2017, 4:44 p.m. said:

Grace Elizabeth


Hi, Pamela :) Thanks so much for reading SAVING ARDEN and leaving such a lovely comment on the first chapters!

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