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In Abby Hamilton’s world, superheroes do more than just stop crime and save cats from trees—they also drink milk straight from the carton and hog the television remote. Abby’s older brother moonlights as the famous Red Comet, but without powers of her own, following in his footsteps has never crossed her mind.
That is, until the city’s newest vigilante comes bursting into her life.
After saving Abby from an attempted mugging, Morriston’s fledgling supervillain Iron Phantom convinces her that he’s not as evil as everyone says, and that their city is under a vicious new threat. As Abby follows him deeper into their city’s darkest secrets, she comes to learn that heroes can’t always be trusted, and sometimes it’s the good guys who wear black.
“Comet,”—I never called my brother by his name in public when he was in costume—“do you need my…” I trailed off, staring at the guy standing over the unconscious attacker. “Who are you?”
The stranger’s green eyes snapped to my own. He wore a black suit, and his mask showed only his eyes, lips, and a portion of his jaw. Unlike Connor, this guy didn’t have a symbol plastered to his chest. My brother’s suit sported a shiny gold swoosh that looked mysteriously like a Nike symbol (but he insisted it was a comet). This guy didn’t have anything.
“I thought I told you to run,” he said, crossing his arms and taking a step toward me. He was about as tall as Connor, easily clearing six foot, and possessed just as many, if not more, muscles bulging through the dark material of his costume.
“How did you—wait, that was your voice in my head?” I had to admit he had a nice voice—deep and smoky. I wondered if it was his real voice or a disguise.
The super winked at me and tapped the side of his head with his index finger. I didn’t know mind-to-mind communication was an actual superpower. Connor frequently gushed at other supers’ powers and would have told me if someone had such a unique ability.
“Okay, well…” I didn’t know what else to say. I wished Connor were here to fly me home. I couldn’t ask this guy. I had no clue who he was, and he didn’t seem like much of a talker.
“I’ll just be going now I guess.”
“Don’t I get a thank you?”
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