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Love's Immortal missashleyjean

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Seventeen-year-old Faith Estrella watches her sister's spirit dance on the lawn in front of their parents' mortuary everyday. Occasionally, other spirits speak to Faith, hoping that she'll communicate their last wishes to their loved ones grieving in the lobby, but she ignores them.

It isn't until she meets Foxx – her school's punk-rock "celebrity" who passes after his car overturns in the lake– that she befriends a spirit other than her sister's. Together, they learn there is more to living, and dating, than they imagined.

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  • 48787 words
  • About 195 pages
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  • Heat

    4

  • Tears

    10

  • Laughs

    6

  • Thrills

    10

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15 comments on "Love's Immortal"

A.G. Stone on Feb. 15, 2018, 11:31 a.m. said:

A.G. Stone


I really like it so far. The only thing is that I noticed a few punctuation things here and there. Other than that, it was great. Keep up the good work. :)

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missashleyjean on Feb. 15, 2018, 10:35 p.m. said:

missashleyjean


Thank you, A.G.! Definitely noted for future drafts :)

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Georgia Bowers on Feb. 10, 2018, 3:08 p.m. said:

Georgia Bowers


Such an interesting premise for a book! Looking forward to seeing where it goes

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missashleyjean on Feb. 11, 2018, 1:25 p.m. said:

missashleyjean


Thank you so much, Georgia! I hope you enjoy it. I look forward to hearing your honest opinions :)

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TimeLadyLoves on Feb. 7, 2018, 11:47 a.m. said:

TimeLadyLoves


I love the story so far, but the grammar is slightly off :)

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missashleyjean on Feb. 8, 2018, 4:48 p.m. said:

missashleyjean


Thank you fore reading! Sorry about the grammar. This was my NaNoWriMo novel for 2017, so it has some errors. Hope they aren't too intrusive.

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samantha on Jan. 17, 2018, 11:31 p.m. said:

samantha


I really enjoyed the plot of the story and I feel like it ended in a more realistic way when compared to other ghost romance stories. I loved this aspect about this story because it was refreshing and new, even though I wish Foxx became a more real and permanent part of Faiths life. For improvements I just noticed some words were mixed up with others and some words were missing the last couple of letters to them. Also, some parts in the beginning felt like the scenes changed quite abruptly. Overall it was a fantastic read.

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missashleyjean on Jan. 19, 2018, 3:04 p.m. said:

missashleyjean


Thank you for your comments, Samantha! They really are quite helpful. There are still some things I'd like to rewrite for clarity's sake, but I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the novel. Thank you for reading!

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Thereaderthathasstarbucks on Jan. 2, 2018, 12:30 p.m. said:

Thereaderthathasstarbucks


I love this book.

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Thereaderthathasstarbucks on Dec. 24, 2017, 3:05 p.m. said:

Thereaderthathasstarbucks


I just finished This and it was so good. I fell in love with Faith and Foxx. I could not believe what happened. This book made me feel all the feels. I totally recommend it. merry Christmas!

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