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Meet Aurora Winters, a perky, innocent, seventeen-year-old loner.
Meet Jeremiah Summers, an ever angry, anti-social, eighteen-year-old loner.
What happens when their paths cross? Will "Sleeping Beauty" find her happily ever after?
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Amber on Sept. 19, 2017, 9:59 p.m. said:
A few grammatical errors, but other than that an overall good book.
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Emily Hollman on Sept. 13, 2017, 10:21 p.m. said:
This is a great story, there are some grammar issues though. The main one is that the story kept saying l and Jer, when it should be Jer and I. Still, I really liked this story.
DorkyPrincezz on Sept. 12, 2017, 2:03 a.m. said:
I like the plot line and the shift in the character's personality, but I feel like there were some parts that could be tweak and improve. And honestly, I love the drama between the girls and how you bring out the jealousy and unrealistic relationship between each couple. I mean it is realistic in some ways but you make it seem dreamy and unbelievable. Sorry it's kind of hard to put it into word