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His Princess Ade Lanumi

Description

Meet Aurora Winters, a perky, innocent, seventeen-year-old loner.

Meet Jeremiah Summers, an ever angry, anti-social, eighteen-year-old loner.

What happens when their paths cross? Will "Sleeping Beauty" find her happily ever after?

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  • 59010 words
  • About 236 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    6

  • Tears

    5

  • Laughs

    7

  • Thrills

    6

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19 comments on "His Princess"

malikabaseball51 on Jan. 25, 2018, 7:51 p.m. said:

malikabaseball51


more editing (punctuation and sentence construction)

My Life Next Door, only a better version

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Jasmine on Dec. 20, 2017, 8:02 a.m. said:

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Lost In A Book on Nov. 30, 2017, 12:56 p.m. said:

Lost In A Book


I enjoyed the story premise and the unique characters. I felt however that the sentence structure and grammar needs fixing in several chapters. Also, the first time Aurora and Jer interact she says he is hot but you don’t describe him besides a nose ring. More details to enrich the setting and characters would be helpful.

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E.Ariel on Nov. 28, 2017, 6:28 p.m. said:

E.Ariel


I loved it!

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Lalajonn1379 on Nov. 24, 2017, 10:59 p.m. said:

Lalajonn1379


It was so cute and I loved it so much

Similar Stories : I would compare this book to stay with me

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IDKseeya on Nov. 12, 2017, 4:35 a.m. said:

IDKseeya


I loved how in the beginning aroura and jer were like frenemies but then they warmed up to each other. and how aroura looked passed all of his flaws. I don't think that there could be any way to improve this book.

Similar Stories : I would compare this book to mainly just the typical high school cliches were they hate each other but they actually care for each other.

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IDKseeya on Nov. 12, 2017, 3:08 a.m. said:

IDKseeya


I love how you put in details. You are just overall a great writer and I would totally buy this book.

I would not compare this book to any other one because each book is different and great in their own ways there is no point in comparing them.

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Intellectual_idiots on Nov. 8, 2017, 9:07 p.m. said:

Intellectual_idiots


Liked it, very cute.

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Intellectual_idiots on Nov. 8, 2017, 9:06 p.m. said:

Intellectual_idiots


It was cute but it had quite a few mistakes. (Good for people that like a cliche)

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bremcfarland on Nov. 6, 2017, 4:42 p.m. said:

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