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Forbidden Games Wes Loder


At age 12, Peter Bain had been sexually abused by a beloved coach. When he reported the abuse, the coach accused him of lying then killed himself. A pariah in his school and a liar to his parents, a cynical Peter speaks only to those who believe him.
Just before his junior year, Peter discovers that a late great-aunt has left him secret financial resources—and a mission. Encouraged, Peter goes out for volleyball—the one sport that his father had forbade him to play.
Then he meets Marty, a hidden survivor and liar. Smitten, Peter courts her, and she convinces the current coach to let him play. His playing then carries the team through the district playoffs.
Finding Peter, in turn, gives Marty the courage to free herself from a sexual abuser, setting in motion deadly events that lead to a climax in a district justice’s courtroom.


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1 comment on "Forbidden Games"

Kristy Brown on Feb. 25, 2017, 8:40 a.m. said:

Kristy Brown

I'm at the 25% mark and wanted to leave a few thoughts. I already knew from reading your last story what a strong, effortless writer you are.
I feel like I haven't got a strong mental image of your main character yet.
Also the first few chapters are full of detail and back story that I felt slightly overwhelmed at times. I felt hooked in from the school chapter.
Liking Marty a lot and looking forward to see how they connect.
I haven't read many books with this theme so I'm intrigued to see where it leads me. Your blurb had me wanting answers. Enjoying it so far. :)

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