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Flint Flare Flame

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All will burn.

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ON SALE: WINTER 2021

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Oksana and Pran weren’t born fire-breathing monsters. But the Vesimaan Empire kidnapped them. Transformed them. Demonized them.

Now spitting flames and with eyes stained black, they are forced into the army. They must burn anyone who opposes the empire… or be incinerated themselves. Their only comforts are the kisses they steal in shadows as they dream of a life together in freedom.

After a troop of fellow soldiers escapes the copper fortress, Pran and Oksana vow to take action. Oksana is hellbent on disbanding the army and returning home. But Pran is determined to become the army’s new master—by any means necessary—and destroy the empire.

In this land of ashen-gray morals, the more Pran and Oksana chase the murky paths to freedom, the more they torch their ties to each other.

Excerpt

In his barrack, Pran snatched his gear off the shelf. His battle uniform was much like his training one—black pants, black tunic with a bright red fire demon patch on the front—except the battle uniform was supple leather instead of coarse fabric. He slid the scaled gauntlets over his arms, bound the brass greaves across his shins, and strapped onto his head the curling horns, dusky-toned to blend with his brown skin and dark hair.

Pran glared at the eye drop bottle, the last item on the shelf. If he outright refused the job there’d be hell to pay, but that didn’t mean he had to play their perfect soldier, either. Those eye drops stung as he poured them in, leaving his eyes solid black: the Demon’s Mark, commanders called it. One glance at eyes without pupil, without iris, without light, made even the fiercest enemies tremble.

Someday, he vowed, it would be his leaders cowering before him.

Oksana was at the gates when he arrived. Her eyes were also stained black and she was crowned by barbed brass horns. If Pran were some wandering miscreant, he’d be on his knees begging for mercy. But when she faced him, hair bound like plaited fire and the leather uniform sleek upon her… there was little he wouldn’t give for another moment with her in his arms.

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"The character development is so robust and real: both Oksana and Pran are fully-fleshed out people who I love and who infuriate me at the same time. I haven't read such a dynamic relationship in a long time—where nothing is black and white, both sides are valid, and the heartache is so real. SO GOOD!!!" —Daisy

"WOW. ... The plot is fast paced and exciting, and had me guessing “HOLY CRAP WHAT’S GONNA HAPPEN HOW ARE THEY GONNA GET OUT OF THIS” until the end. It was a fantastic read, and I cannot recommend it enough!!" —LindsayLHess

"The writing is beautiful, and I love how much tension is packed in each chapter. I couldn't stop reading. It's one of those stories that has stayed with me long after reading it." —Kimberly