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Dream Keeper Amber R. Duell

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The Sandman is Nora’s closest friend and best kept secret—he has to be if she doesn’t want to lose him. One word about the Sandman will have Nora’s mother dragging her back to the psychiatrist for brain-numbing medication. But when people close to Nora start dying gruesome deaths in their sleep, the Sandman is the only one she can turn to.

When Nora learns the Sandman hid the secret to his enemy’s release inside her dreams, everything finally makes sense. That doesn’t ease the sting of betrayal. And things are only about to get worse. The Weaver, Lord of Nightmares, will do whatever it takes to make Nora hand over the information—even if that means kidnapping her sister—but he underestimated how far she would go to protect her family.

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  • 75097 words
  • About 300 pages
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9 comments on "Dream Keeper"

KyraMNelson on March 18, 2017, 1:09 a.m. said:

KyraMNelson


Loved the concept! I felt like Nora should have reacted more to her friend's death.

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KyraMNelson on March 17, 2017, 1:21 p.m. said:

KyraMNelson


I really like the concept and voice, but sometimes it feels a little explain-y.

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EmMa on March 3, 2017, 6:43 p.m. said:

EmMa


I really liked the plot and the characters! Although I would've liked to know more about Nora and Sandman's first meeting 5 years ago, I really liked the development of the story and the way you described everything in a way that was easy for the readers to picture what they were reading. It was a really bad idea to read this late a night haha, you pretty much nailed the creepy vibe. Hmm if not, the way you also ended it made it seem as though there would be more to the story.. Is there going to be a second book or an epilogue?

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Amber R. Duell on March 3, 2017, 6:48 p.m. said:

Amber R. Duell


Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I toyed with the idea of having Nora and Sandman's first meeting as a prologue but wasn't sure. I may revisit the idea now! As for the ending, I do have a sequel in mind. :)

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EmMa on March 3, 2017, 7:23 p.m. said:

EmMa


I think if you added more about their first meeting or about her past meeting with psychiatrists it would be easier to understand how isolated she feels, even if you did fine without! And oohh so you're thinking of posting another book? :O

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Amber R. Duell on March 3, 2017, 7:36 p.m. said:

Amber R. Duell


Thanks EmMa! I'll definitely think about working that in. I am thinking about it! :)

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SebbiesMomma on Feb. 27, 2017, 7:54 p.m. said:

SebbiesMomma


So far, really good! I'm sucked into the story and I want to know what happens next!

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Jessica Jackson on Feb. 23, 2017, 1:42 a.m. said:

Jessica Jackson


I'm really enjoying this book so far and I am definitely intrigued! I was curious in the beginning how Nora came into contact with the Sandman in the first place, but it looks like you are slowly showing us this (without info-dump) and I like that! I haven't encountered any major issues yet, mostly just really minor things. There are occasions where I have to reread a line to get the full meaning, but I figure that's not a huge problem (and it could just be me). Anyway, I'm going to keep reading!

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Amber R. Duell on Feb. 23, 2017, 11 p.m. said:

Amber R. Duell


Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

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