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Chase the Night ppickett

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Tessa honors her deceased daredevil brother’s memory by street racing, but after getting caught she hasn’t been allowed near the Mustang.

When his former gang leader comes knocking on Corey’s door, saying no places Corey’s family in danger. Saying yes to vandalizing the car of the cop who put Corey away might mean a one way ticket back to jail.

After Tessa catches Corey destroying her Mustang, she should turn him over to the police. Instead, Tessa sees a guy trying to escape his own demons, and convinces her father to let Corey fix the damage he caused.

Falling for each other wasn't part of the plan, but neither Corey or Tessa can ignore the pull between them. When danger comes knocking at the door, they'll both have to face their demons in order to have a future neither of them thought was possible.

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  • 81611 words
  • About 326 pages
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9 comments on "Chase the Night"

Tara Tsai on Oct. 1, 2017, 9:05 p.m. said:

Tara Tsai


Hey PPickett,

I am enjoying the first 4 chapters of your book so far. Your writing is clear and the dual POVs have very different voices, which I think is super important when there is more than one POV.

I enjoyed the backstories of each character and the fact that Corey is a bad kid, but is trying to redeem himself and is caught in a tough place.

So far it's reminding me a bit of the fast and furious movies, only because she loves her car and has a cop father, and he's on the wrong side of the law.

I won't be able to continue reading at this point, but I'll try to read more later if I have time. Best of luck this season!

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ppickett on Oct. 4, 2017, 12:42 a.m. said:

ppickett


thanks! Hope you enjoy the rest, too!

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Tara Tsai on Oct. 1, 2017, 9:05 p.m. said:

Tara Tsai


Hey PPickett,

I am enjoying the first 4 chapters of your book so far. Your writing is clear and the dual POVs have very different voices, which I think is super important when there is more than one POV.

I enjoyed the backstories of each character and the fact that Corey is a bad kid, but is trying to redeem himself and is caught in a tough place.

So far it's reminding me a bit of the fast and furious movies, only because she loves her car and has a cop father, and he's on the wrong side of the law.

I won't be able to continue reading at this point, but I'll try to read more later if I have time. Best of luck this season!

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Tara Tsai on Sept. 22, 2017, 11:01 a.m. said:

Tara Tsai


Hey there!
I find your premise very intriguing, but I've got a little advice for you. Typically people skip over books that don't have a cover. If you add a basic picture with some text on it, it can greatly help you get noticed by the community.
If you're not sure where to start for free pictures, I suggest going to the pexels website and maybe just grabbing one of a cute couple that could represent the romance in this book.
Just some advice from one swooner to another. Best of luck!!

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ppickett on Sept. 25, 2017, 12:13 a.m. said:

ppickett


Thanks! I made a cover a while back (actually two) but the website won't let me upload one. I've tried multiple times and can't figure out what is wrong. Hopefully I can get it figured out soon.

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Tara Tsai on Sept. 25, 2017, 1:47 a.m. said:

Tara Tsai


Not sure if you use twitter but Swoon is pretty responsive there if you've already sent them an error report email. Or Just send your cover directly to their email. Hopefully they can help.

I hope you can figure it out soon!

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Emily Hollman on Sept. 12, 2017, 7:21 p.m. said:

Emily Hollman


This is an awesome story.

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ppickett on Sept. 13, 2017, 2:10 a.m. said:

ppickett


Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it!

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Gg908 on Sept. 9, 2017, 3:37 p.m. said:

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❤️🙂🙂🙂😀

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