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Beguiling Trickery Chani Lynn Feener

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Kenna Erikson knows absolutely nothing about Norse mythology. Which is daunting, considering she's a volur, a type of seer the Vikings believed garnered favor with the gods. For the most part, she ignores her gifts, and the useless ability to foresee thirty or so seconds into the future. For as long as she can remember, she's had only herself to rely on, and she likes that just fine. However, when shadows suddenly come alive and attack her, she's forced to seek outside help in the form of tall, blonde, and infinitely annoying, Luka. Somehow, Luka knows all about her attackers, and the mythology they spring from. He's also eager to help out, despite the fact they've only just met. But what secret is he keeping? Who is he really? And why does her heart flip every time he's around?

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  • About 383 pages
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  • Heat

    10

  • Tears

    5

  • Laughs

    8

  • Thrills

    8

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70 comments on "Beguiling Trickery"

+Victoria+ on June 20, 2017, 4:10 p.m. said:

+Victoria+


i have honestly enjoyed everything thus far. Some grammatical errors but hey who am i to judge. the pacing is good i never have felt that i have gotten way to much information at all, which is a hard feet for some. So very well done thus far :))

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chubbs on Dec. 27, 2016, 11:42 p.m. said:

chubbs


I loved everything about it, from the romance to the characters. My only suggestion would be that there would have been a better plot line. As much as i loved the romance, the general story could be explained more and elaborated upon better.

I'd compare it to The Return by Jennifer L. Armentrout because the romance between Kenna and Luka (Loki).

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MB on Dec. 16, 2016, 9:16 a.m. said:

MB


I really enjoyed the story. It was written really well. I loved the way the author incorporated Norse and Greek mythology in her story and made it really unique. I could definitely see how much research she had done. I did get confused at times and there were a few scenes of info dump. I also did skim read some of the more boring bits, like the info dumps and the flashbacks (which were essential to the story, but I personally never like flashbacks). One interesting thing was that even though Kenna is eighteen, I felt like she was more in her 20s. Even after her age was revealed, she felt more mature than a teenager. This could have been because she was supporting herself for a long time and being independent and she may have had a more mature personality, but I think this book just feels more NA than YA, which I have no problem with. It's just that though she was eighteen she felt older and it would suit the story more if she was a little older. Anyway, besides that, the chemistry between the two main characters was there and the ending was really well done. I can't wait to see what happens next!

P.S. Now I get what the 'Trickery' part of the title means!

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MB on Dec. 15, 2016, 1:20 a.m. said:

MB


I really like it so far. I'm interested in what will happen next. The daydream thing can be a little confusing sometimes but I'm sure everything will be cleared up soon in the coming chapters.

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candidAce on Oct. 8, 2016, 10:22 p.m. said:

candidAce


Great plot and the main character was very relatable. Luka came off as extremely off putting, in my opinion. It almost made me stop reading it, but he became a likable character around chapter 9 with a few creepy or annoying parts here and there. Other than that and a few spelling errors, the story was great with an amazing cast and I hope more things are cleared up in a sequel (if you're planning on it).

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Chantilly on Sept. 5, 2016, 12:26 p.m. said:

Chantilly


Wow this was amazing I think the only thing I picked up on was the fact that the first action type scene was confusing a little but this was really good. Everything was planned out so nicely...can't wait until the next one.

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Chani Lynn Feener on Sept. 16, 2016, 2:25 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


Thanks for reading!!!

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Amanda Berry on Aug. 15, 2016, 12:57 a.m. said:

Amanda Berry


The story was so compelling and gripping (I finished it in less than 24 hours). The only thing that I would change is that certain parts, mainly action packed ones, were a little hard to follow like I didn't understand where they were going, but this was only at maybe 3 parts.
I loved the book so much. It was a really fun read!

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Chani Lynn Feener on Sept. 16, 2016, 2:25 p.m. said:

Chani Lynn Feener


Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! Glad you liked it! I do need to work on slowing those action scenes down so they aren't so jumbled and confusing for readers! :/

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xxxheartlandxxx on Aug. 14, 2016, 7:29 p.m. said:

xxxheartlandxxx


I loved the story so much! There were only a few typo things, but other than that it was fantastic. I loved Kenna and Luka/Loki is by far one of my favorite male characters in a book ever. You left it open for a sequel and I so hope that there is, and that I can read it because I didn't want the book to end. It was great and definitely publication worthy.

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