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As the World Turns Cold Courtney Pierce

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Mercy Baudelaire has been locked up since the day the government took her away from her family. The reason? To save their lives. Her childhood was spent on the run, escaping the hands reaching out to pull her into a world of deadly experiments. Because of her gifts she fought so hard to conceal, freedom was nonexistent.

As Mercy finds herself on the run once again, she encounters misfits with powers of their own; allies in a game of life she was sure to lose. Now, placing faith in freedom didn't sound too impossible. But where faith exists, darkness often lies in wait. Mercy's enemies refuse to go down easily and not even time can save her now.

In AS THE WORLD TURNS COLD, Mercy sets out on an adventure to prove that in a broken world where the line between human and monster wears thin, a little faith goes a long way.

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  • 71673 words
  • About 287 pages
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Swoon Index Ranking

  • Heat

    7

  • Tears

    3

  • Laughs

    2

  • Thrills

    7

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17 comments on "As the World Turns Cold"

Amilner123 on Jan. 22, 2018, 2:21 p.m. said:

Amilner123


This book is truly amazing... so amazing that I’ve read it twice! It kept me on the edge of my seat and kept me up most of the night haha. Great job and awesome book! Can’t wait for the next piece of work that you come up with! 😊

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Courtney Pierce on Jan. 25, 2018, 11:11 a.m. said:

Courtney Pierce


Thank you so much!! Your support means the world to me! I’m glad you enjoyed the book!!(:

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Nikki Meeks on Dec. 24, 2017, 10:13 a.m. said:

Nikki Meeks


I thought it was good, the story line was fluid and easy to follow. The characters were well developed and the names were interesting. Overall I thought it was a good read.

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Courtney Pierce on Jan. 25, 2018, 11:12 a.m. said:

Courtney Pierce


Thank you so much for taking the time to read my book and leave feedback! I’m glad you liked it! (:

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Creek Eaton on Dec. 6, 2017, 1:27 p.m. said:

Creek Eaton


The story was well written and the characters worked off each other well! You managed to keep it moving quickly enough that it didn't feel like the story was dragging, which is a godsend for someone with an attention span like mine!
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Courtney Pierce on Dec. 6, 2017, 2:43 p.m. said:

Courtney Pierce


Thank you so much for taking the time to read my novel and leaving feedback! I'm glad you have enjoyed it! I completely understand the attention thing as I can get like that myself when books seem to drag on. I've taken your other comments into consideration as well, and will try to implement them in the next editing round I do. Thank you again for your rating and comments!

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Creek Eaton on Nov. 30, 2017, 1:43 p.m. said:

Creek Eaton


It's interesting so far, if a little prosey. And sometimes the segways don't seem to connect that well with what they're segwaying to, but it's really good otherwise!

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Annie Stavreva on Nov. 28, 2017, 4:18 p.m. said:

Annie Stavreva


So far so good. I'm hooked!

A suggestion would be to try to make your use of language clearer as I had to go over sentences to understand their meaning. This could easily be cleared up by just changing the structure of the sentence or making it into two.

But that is if I'm being nit-picky, if this was a real book I just got from the library I wouldn't see anything wrong.

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Courtney Pierce on Dec. 6, 2017, 2:37 p.m. said:

Courtney Pierce


Thank you so much for your feedback! I do struggle with that sometimes and I appreciate your suggestion! I'll definitely put it to use when I edit. I'm glad you have been enjoying it! Thank you for taking the time to read it!

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Amber on Nov. 21, 2017, 1:03 p.m. said:

Amber


So good

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